Thursday, June 4, 2009

Introduction to "Step by Step"

For my third piece, I chose my eighteenth journal "Step by Step" which was written during our seventh week in class. This journal is about telling a child how to do something he had never done before, so I had to keep in mind that I am writing as if I was writing to a child. So instead of saying, "Don't do this," I wrote, "Remember not to touch the shiny prong or insert your finger in the power outlet, or you'll be fried," as a sign of caution.

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  1. Haha. "...or you'll be fried" is definitely you don't hear everyday being said to a child.

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